Inclusion of maps

After peer feedback with a fellow colleague, we discussed the importance of 'place' and allowing the scene setting becoming broad and more prominent.

My colleague was curious about Ken, wanted to know more about his habits and was surprised by his lack of ambition and travel experiences. In his 60+ years Ken has only really stayed within the perimeter of a 10 mile radius. We discussed the inclusion of a map to help relay more about his life and to show how the speech ' blindfolded' could be mirrored in the animation. The stop frame animation was well received, more context for Ken's personality was sought. Reflecting on the work with my colleague, it was clear to me that two of the 'Yeah' references (next to the NWS) need to be scaled up as Ken practically shouts this.

As regards the completion of the written part of the submission, I am currently reviewing 'Intonation' Bolinger, D 1972 and instead of 1,000 words based on the sketchbooks I am keen to submit an essay to express the parallels and differences between spoken language and typography. I am recognising the similarities between transcription convention and typographic marks. I am also aware of the intricacies of audio and the selection of typefaces to fit the purpose and I know there is more to be researched in this area.