The beginning sequence, showing the map of Burton-On-Trent appeared, on reflection, to judder and cut too quickly and ominously from one scale of map to the next and the final shot with the red dot is too rapid for the viewer to comprehend.
I have altered this sequence and simplified it. A large map is zoomed into, at the same time an opaque red dot identifies the house of interest which quickly fades into the door countdown sequence.
Another change has been to add in a more prominent title 'Legacy' to the beginning, this is to mirror the credits where the title appears again but smaller.
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